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i really like this one because it there with out being notice it just a plain disguise in plain sight at first sight you would just think it was the fossil of some old work but it really a story in disguise something for people to stumble upon and to think "i wonder how long that been there" and all you have to do is look hard enough.
I suppose I might as well review this and help save it from the green room, right?
So, honestly, this confused me at first. I thought it actually was a deleted work, but I soon realized my mistaken perception.
This is clearly a work of art meant to inspire thought and evoke emotion in the reader. What such emotion is unclear, but I feel slightly wiser after having read this.
The use of "deleted" and then "delete" does seem a bit repetitive. Otherwise, this article is truly a wondrous piece. I encourage you to write more such works and further strengthen your obvious talent for making the public think.
Great job, vox nihili!
-Jules
*Claps* One of the best reviews I've ever seen.
Was this really worth the 350 points...? XD
A review play by littlemac64, please enjoy:
BRILLIANT, I say, BRILLIANT.
Such cunning use of diction! Such a beautiful yet poignant commentary on on today's decaying society, specifically, how the individual doth not need to succumb to what the kids call today...the MAN! Truly a speech that evokes such emotions form the readers inner being.
Now you may ask which one? Precisely, what feelings, what thought and ideas probe and question the readers purview on their own humanity. Well, that is difficult to say. Much like the works message, it all depends on the individual. Some might say that it appeals to their more intellectual side as it gives hard hitting facts, while others may feel for the more pathos side, as it describes the down fall of the current masses and questions whether or not they can redeem themselves. Although personally, would have to say...ALL OF THEM! ALL THE EMOTIONS!!!
However, my absolute favorite part was the love rivalry between "Please", "post" as they vie for the attention of "delete" who is the personification of of the MAN (as described earlier) and their internal conundrum is revealed as they question themselves as to whether or not they should go against their political standings of freedom and independence just to gain the affection of the beautiful "delete". Such grace!
All of this is further emphasized as signs of conflict and war begin to brew to the west, which is further progressed by "Content" and, much to everyone's surprise, "deleted", who was revealed to be "delete's" thought to be dead brother.Such beautiful writing. Such... despair!
I thank you kind writer, and a goodnight to ALL!
*bows to a stadium of cheering audience, before being handcuffed by the police*
Well.... darn xD